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[rtnp] Custom Map Review: "Wanderer of Na Pali" by Unpunished

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Subject: [rtnp] Custom Map Review: "Wanderer of Na Pali" by Unpunished

Post Posted: 11 May 2013, 20:55

Wanderer of Na Pali
by Unpunished
Tagline: A grand concept brought down by unbalanced gameplay.

Wanderer of Na Pali is a recently released map pack that consists of 11 playable levels and a short ending. Unlike most multi-map endeavors these days, it uses only stock assets so the archive is quite small. The story - if you're lucky enough to find a translator, I had to summon one - is set some time after Unreal and, quite unusually, sees the Nali victorious in their attempt of freeing themselves from Skaarj occupation. The invading reptilians seem to have been beaten so badly that there's just a few isolated groups that have to be taken care of. As the player discovers, however, things are about to change since a certain Warlord has amassed quite an army and is prepared to reclaim the planet. And, perhaps due to an extreme case of bad luck, the player ends up right in the middle of this rekindled conflict.

Who is the player, anyway? Judging from the title, they may be just another wanderer from a long list of human survivors that were forced to call the unhospitable planet their home. Corpses of others, killed by environmental hazards or the reinvading Skaarj, seem to confirm that as well. Other details are left for the players' imagination. All in all, it is the classic Unreal story of a marooned survivor - only implemented worse. The translator messages are scarce and reveal little about the world. Two new deities are introduced but their role is largely unexplored. There is one thing worth noticing though: this time around, the player gets to talk to the Nali. Some of them just deliver a casual smalltalk line, others direct you to your next destination. There is even an irritated native -- and rightfully so because he becomes displeased when the player has the nerve to enter his home uninvited. These small details give the illusion of an authentic world, reacting specifically to what you do just like the real equivalent outside the window.

This experience is hindered however by lack of non-hostile lifeforms that were abundant in the original game. Unpunished failed to replicate that feel: there is not a single rabbit or hawk, no fish schools. The only living beings - besides Nali - are all after you, all others seem to have gone extinct. And that's too bad since the jungle levels could use some of the flying or hopping critters, water reservoirs would feel more authentic with fish other than the big, hostile ones.

A memorial of the Nali victory over their oppressors... however shortlived that victory was.

The chance to observe these details in peace will not come often however. The game world, albeit not very large, is filled with LOTS of things to kill. There's titans, stone titans, various types of Skaarj as well as their brute and Krall henchmen. Apart from that, there's a wide array of pests: mantae, tentacles and devilfish. And, naturally, there's also the aforementioned Warlord whom you're pursuing like a true implacable man.

Unpunished did try to change the gameplay model a bit, by pitting the player against impossible to beat enemies (titans versus a Dispersion Pistol - RUN!), thus forcing them to flee and avoid the attackers like the plague, ofen facing close encounters, barely escaping alive. But that did come at a price. The author hasn't provided nearly enough ammo to kill everything that's charging you, often forcing the players to either circle around spamming Dispersion shots while praying "please God, don't let him hit me again..." or run away like a crazy ostrich, dying from a stray missile/Skaarj projectile/whatever. This often makes the pack an exercise in frustration.

The... jungle. Or so it is stated ingame.

The gameworld is varied, that's for sure: the player begins the journey in a snow-clad mountain landscape, traverses a jungle, a cavern and an underground temple, finally ending up on a desert, complete with a mirage of an oasis that changes into a sand dune right before the player's eyes. While the texturing is most of the time proper as is the build (I've met only 3-4 situations worth criticizing, a broken skybox and invisible walls in the desert and odd texturing of one of the houses there), I can't help but be disappointed. The levels look plain. And dated. I wouldn't expect such simple architecture from a pack made in 2012 and requiring the feature-abundant 227 patch. Where are the emitters? Where are the static meshes? But even without them, this could've looked better. The lighting is primitive, save for the cavern area, where it's little above primitive. The construction also contributes for the WTF factor: the jungle is made from a series of wooden walls and round objects which probably were to be tree coronas. And at the same time we have disappearing oasis mirages, quite realistic - even if a bit empty - factory and very decent cavern construction. The visuals are varied -- but unfortunately, the cons outweigh the pros.

One of the factory rooms.

The audio layer is equally uneven. Lack of almost any ambience makes the world seem lifeless. This is especially felt in the jungle. While the mountain and desert segments can be lifeless by nature, a tropical forest never stops its peculiar song of chirps, tweets and insectoidal trickling -- none of which is present here. There is a varied selection of songs including Return to Na Pali additions - so Unreal Gold patched to 227 is required to play! - but that doesn't make up for the ambience-lacking atmosphere even though the tracks mostly fit the places they're applied to.

It came from the desert... it! IT! The skybox! RUN!

The concept is grand, beyond the shadow of a doubt. A nameless journeyman that could be any single one of us embarks on a journey that takes them from one place to another and these are varied places which if made properly, would amaze. However the entire pack is brought down by omnipresent plainness, lackluster sound layer and most importantly: unbalanced gameplay. I played this on stock Unreal difficulty (renamed Very Hard for the 227 patch) and barely missed a shot and still I was often forced to spam Dispersion shots at two or three enemies at a time. People shouldn't be punished for selecting the highest difficulty level - it should be a challenge and not exercise in frustration. That, I think, is the most important factor. Players can be quite forgiving for low standards of visuals or soundtrack as long as the gaming experience rewards that with a balanced and interesting gameplay. It does not happen here and the pack suffers a lot due to that. Still, I'd recommend to play it at least once. Despite its drawbacks, it's clearly a labor of love, for both the classic that is the original Unreal as well as for the community that remains despite the passing of time.


Architecture: 3
Texturing: 5
Lighting: 3
Sound: 2
Technical Execution: 4

Conceptual Grandness: 7
Story Construction: 5
Story Implementation: 3
Gameplay Awe: 4
Gameplay Balance: 3

Total Score: 39%

Downloads: - 6 MB - KlanKAOS - 6 MB - Dropbox - 6 MB - UnrealTexture
Last edited by Delacroix on 18 May 2013, 03:29, edited 1 time in total.
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Subject: Re: [rtnp] Custom Map Review: "Wanderer of Na Pali" by Unpunished

Post Posted: 14 May 2013, 22:51

This pack is very imaginative, I really felt like I was drawn into this world with all those events going on there, I loved travelling from continent to continent, visiting interesting locales, and as i'm going along this plot evolves. It kind of reminded me of Nali Chronicles in that respect.

It’s just too bad that the build quality wasn’t very good, it was quite rough at some edges, particularly the icy area's were pretty empty, the jungle could've been bigger as well.
All in all I’m hoping Unpunished will continue mapping, the world and backstory he fleshed out was interesting enough that I’m willing to see more of it, and hopefully he’ll be a lot better accustomed to the editor by then.

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Subject: forgot to mention the map

Post Posted: 14 Mar 2016, 05:21

I feel this mapper deserves an honorable mention for the very nice map of Na Pali included with his pack. This has got to be a contribution unique in Unreal history, and when I play through the original campaign again I'll be keeping it in my hip pocket. (Edit: lest there be any confusion, this is not a game map that you play through but an actual geographical map, one that you look at so you can tell where you are, with place names etc. It's a jpeg.)

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